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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 20:19:38 GMT -5
okay so im writing a fanfic-type of thing as you know[view fanfics section, it is the only post in there as of now], and i wrote the first page. i want to know what you think and what can be done to fix it. ;D
The screams of the crowd were still fresh in my mind. It only happened a half hour ago, but it feels like seconds ago. Standing in the crowd with my friends watching the band we adore perform was enough. But now we were going to meet them. The seconds went by like hours now, each lasting longer than the one before. We just stood there, with emotionless expressions on our faces. Audrey, Jessica, Nick and I were silent. We didn't know what to expect and were too nervous to speak. "I can't wait to go in." I broke the silence. "Me either. I love them a lot." Audrey loves My Chemical Romance as much as I do, and that's how we became friends. "They are such amazing people. I'm so happy we can meet them." Nick loves them as much as Audrey and I do. "Gerard was singing great," Leave it to Jessica to talk about the person she liked most. "Do you think they'll recognize you, Em?" I've been to many concerts, as has Audrey. Nick and Jess haven't been to as many. "I don't know. Maybe." I highly doubt it.
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:22:51 GMT -5
I like it...............................but I wanna meet My Chemical Romance(and Hedley).
My Mom and me have problems.
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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 20:23:31 GMT -5
your mom??
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:25:06 GMT -5
Yeah, I loolk at my Mom, she look at me, then 2 seconds later we both brust out laughing.
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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 20:27:13 GMT -5
ooohhh. i need help. ill have these moments where ill just act insane and like laugh for five minutes for no reason and ill be shaking like im nervous or excited or something. thats when im on the computer. if i did that in front of my mom shed be like
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:31:55 GMT -5
OMG, I have moments when I'll be dancing and talking and I'll fall and I'll laugh, then I'll said I can't get up and then I pop up then I sat in front of my computer..........then I'll jump up and do that all over again.
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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 20:34:47 GMT -5
lol i wish we could make sims that were exactly like us. i swear mine would be sent off to the insane asylum right away.
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:37:41 GMT -5
Mine would be hoping to meet Hedley and My Chemical Romance and cry when she founds out My Chemical Romance isn't coming to her town............oh, wait, that's me.
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Post by Audrey. on Jun 8, 2007 20:38:46 GMT -5
Hahaha . . .I can't play Sims, too much CC . As for the constructive criticism, I think you should make us talk more like teenagers .
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:40:05 GMT -5
Ahhh...................teenagers.....................................Teenagers srcae the living shit out of me/They could care less.
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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 20:43:26 GMT -5
but were adults. cause itd be kinda, uhm..weird if you and Mikey were together and you were a teenager.
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:44:25 GMT -5
Haha, and Mikey can't be married.
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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 20:45:41 GMT -5
oh if i wanted to he could lol. and i mean, ima be married to Frank and my friend is gonna marry Gee so it works out.
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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 20:48:46 GMT -5
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:52:04 GMT -5
oh if i wanted to he could lol. and i mean, ima be married to Frank and my friend is gonna marry Gee so it works out. What.......................nooooooooo Gerard mine , nah, I rather be with Jacob.
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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 20:53:43 GMT -5
i could arrange for that if there was a sim of him..........
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:57:10 GMT -5
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 20:58:15 GMT -5
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Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 8, 2007 21:01:54 GMT -5
the second picture of Jacob kinda scared me at first...
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Post by hedleyndmcrfan9 on Jun 8, 2007 21:03:12 GMT -5
Yeah, well that's Jake for ya.......................I mean come on the guy drank his and he's band mates pee.
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