Post by `emz0, bby. on Jul 3, 2007 15:36:37 GMT -5
it short and i think it sucks. id have made it longer but i wanted the exciting [not really exciting but interesting] stuff in the next chapter so it could all be together.
The first night alone that I’ve ever had in this house. Eerily quiet. I locked the doors and I headed upstairs for the night. I slipped into a [surprise!] black tank top and [another surprise!] black pajama bottoms. I slid under my Nightmare Before Christmas blanket and slowly drifted to sleep. I awoke to people talking downstairs. I quickly sat up and listened more intently. It was the TV. But no one could have possibly gotten into the house and turned it on, and I know it wasn’t on when I went to bed. I walked downstairs and looked around. The doors were all still closed and no windows were broken. I went back into the living room and thought about it for a second. All of a sudden, the TV turned off by itself. That really freaked me out. I went into the kitchen and made myself breakfast. I sat at the table and ate downstairs, wondering about what I had just witnessed. After that I got dressed in my usual band tee and dark jeans, applied my eyeliner, and sat outside. I saw cheery little kids hopping around, I saw the popular girls driving around with their cell phone in one hand and applying makeup in the rearview mirror with the other, and I saw nothing that seemed even remotely fun to do. I walked back inside and waited for someone to call or text me. It only took about ten minutes for that to happen. Rachel texted me. “Wanna hang 0ut 0r sumthin 2day?” Aahh, I hate it when she types like that. “Sure I have nothing else better to do. Wanna come over here?” I waited for a reply text. It never takes her long to text back. “sure c u s00n” My day won’t be completely boring. I had some time to think. I mostly thought about Frank. He’s so nice to me. I don’t think I deserve someone like him. He deserves someone much prettier. I love him though. I really do. Rachel walked in the door and threw herself onto the couch. “Anything interesting happen?” “Not really,” I lied, not mentioning the TV ‘incident’, if you could call it that. “Wanna go out and do something?” “Like what?” “Get some ice cream.” “Why not? I’m bored anyway.” “Yay!!!!” We headed out to the ice cream parlor. We got there and Rachel ordered what she always did: chocolate ice cream. And she flirted with the cashier. I have no idea why. She is very flirtatious. I ordered my cookie dough ice cream and we sat at a table. Then, Frank walked in with Gerard. I watched them, and after they ordered Frank saw me. I don’t know if Rachel told them we were coming here, or if they came here on a whim, but I was glad either way. They sat with us, and we all talked. I don’t know if Rach told them about my father, but I think Frank knew. He had his arm around my shoulders, like he was trying to show people that I’m his and he’s mine. “Hey!” Rachel threw ice cream at me! It wasn’t a lot. Actually it was practically nothing, but it was cold. I threw some back at her and stuck my tongue out at her. She did it again but this time she missed me and hit Frank. That made her laugh even harder, and I laughed too. Then Frank threw some at Gerard. Gerard found it essential to throw some at me. It went on for a few more seconds until we noticed everyone staring at us. We left after that, and we went back to my house. We went up to my room to watch a movie. Corpse Bride. I love that movie. Frank and I were on my bed, while Gerard and Rachel were on the floor. I told them they could sit on my bed, as there is enough room, but they chose the floor. Frank played with my hands throughout the whole movie, and I let him. I was paying too much attention to Frank and the movie [mostly Frank], and I didn’t notice that Gerard and Rachel started playing tonsil hockey until the movie was almost over. I was going to do something to make fun of them, but Frank told me not to because he had a better idea. We got up and went downstairs, Gerard and Rachel oblivious to what we just did. We sat down on the couch and we just talked [yes, we’re boring people]. “You sad that your father’s gone?” “Not really. I mean, I cried, but I wasn’t sad. He was never nice to me so I don’t have a reason to miss him.” “I thought Aiden was staying with you?” “He is, he just went to get his stuff in Florida.” “Oh.” He seemed like he wanted to tell me something, but he didn‘t really want to.. “What do you want to tell me?” “Well, we gotta go on tour. I don’t want to, because then I have to be away from you.” “How long do you have to go on tour for?” “One month.” I don’t want him to leave, but I know that the fans really want to see them. “When do you leave?” “In a few days. We just found out two days ago.” “I’m gonna miss you.” “I’m gonna miss you too. I’ll call you everyday.” He pulled me close to him and I rested my head against his shoulder. He looked at me and kissed me for a few seconds, but in those few seconds Gerard and Rachel walked down. “There’s a bed upstairs you know…” They started laughing. I’m not trying to be a bitch or anything, but I just didn’t find that funny. Not to be random, but I’m not looking forward to them leaving.
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The first night alone that I’ve ever had in this house. Eerily quiet. I locked the doors and I headed upstairs for the night. I slipped into a [surprise!] black tank top and [another surprise!] black pajama bottoms. I slid under my Nightmare Before Christmas blanket and slowly drifted to sleep. I awoke to people talking downstairs. I quickly sat up and listened more intently. It was the TV. But no one could have possibly gotten into the house and turned it on, and I know it wasn’t on when I went to bed. I walked downstairs and looked around. The doors were all still closed and no windows were broken. I went back into the living room and thought about it for a second. All of a sudden, the TV turned off by itself. That really freaked me out. I went into the kitchen and made myself breakfast. I sat at the table and ate downstairs, wondering about what I had just witnessed. After that I got dressed in my usual band tee and dark jeans, applied my eyeliner, and sat outside. I saw cheery little kids hopping around, I saw the popular girls driving around with their cell phone in one hand and applying makeup in the rearview mirror with the other, and I saw nothing that seemed even remotely fun to do. I walked back inside and waited for someone to call or text me. It only took about ten minutes for that to happen. Rachel texted me. “Wanna hang 0ut 0r sumthin 2day?” Aahh, I hate it when she types like that. “Sure I have nothing else better to do. Wanna come over here?” I waited for a reply text. It never takes her long to text back. “sure c u s00n” My day won’t be completely boring. I had some time to think. I mostly thought about Frank. He’s so nice to me. I don’t think I deserve someone like him. He deserves someone much prettier. I love him though. I really do. Rachel walked in the door and threw herself onto the couch. “Anything interesting happen?” “Not really,” I lied, not mentioning the TV ‘incident’, if you could call it that. “Wanna go out and do something?” “Like what?” “Get some ice cream.” “Why not? I’m bored anyway.” “Yay!!!!” We headed out to the ice cream parlor. We got there and Rachel ordered what she always did: chocolate ice cream. And she flirted with the cashier. I have no idea why. She is very flirtatious. I ordered my cookie dough ice cream and we sat at a table. Then, Frank walked in with Gerard. I watched them, and after they ordered Frank saw me. I don’t know if Rachel told them we were coming here, or if they came here on a whim, but I was glad either way. They sat with us, and we all talked. I don’t know if Rach told them about my father, but I think Frank knew. He had his arm around my shoulders, like he was trying to show people that I’m his and he’s mine. “Hey!” Rachel threw ice cream at me! It wasn’t a lot. Actually it was practically nothing, but it was cold. I threw some back at her and stuck my tongue out at her. She did it again but this time she missed me and hit Frank. That made her laugh even harder, and I laughed too. Then Frank threw some at Gerard. Gerard found it essential to throw some at me. It went on for a few more seconds until we noticed everyone staring at us. We left after that, and we went back to my house. We went up to my room to watch a movie. Corpse Bride. I love that movie. Frank and I were on my bed, while Gerard and Rachel were on the floor. I told them they could sit on my bed, as there is enough room, but they chose the floor. Frank played with my hands throughout the whole movie, and I let him. I was paying too much attention to Frank and the movie [mostly Frank], and I didn’t notice that Gerard and Rachel started playing tonsil hockey until the movie was almost over. I was going to do something to make fun of them, but Frank told me not to because he had a better idea. We got up and went downstairs, Gerard and Rachel oblivious to what we just did. We sat down on the couch and we just talked [yes, we’re boring people]. “You sad that your father’s gone?” “Not really. I mean, I cried, but I wasn’t sad. He was never nice to me so I don’t have a reason to miss him.” “I thought Aiden was staying with you?” “He is, he just went to get his stuff in Florida.” “Oh.” He seemed like he wanted to tell me something, but he didn‘t really want to.. “What do you want to tell me?” “Well, we gotta go on tour. I don’t want to, because then I have to be away from you.” “How long do you have to go on tour for?” “One month.” I don’t want him to leave, but I know that the fans really want to see them. “When do you leave?” “In a few days. We just found out two days ago.” “I’m gonna miss you.” “I’m gonna miss you too. I’ll call you everyday.” He pulled me close to him and I rested my head against his shoulder. He looked at me and kissed me for a few seconds, but in those few seconds Gerard and Rachel walked down. “There’s a bed upstairs you know…” They started laughing. I’m not trying to be a bitch or anything, but I just didn’t find that funny. Not to be random, but I’m not looking forward to them leaving.
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