Post by Stevison on Aug 1, 2007 17:52:22 GMT -5
Audrey made this section cause of me. Be jealous, bitches! No, I dunno if she did, but uhh, here's my story:
Well, some notes about my story:
Firstly, this is a story about 3 juniors in high school, named Nate, Dreya, and Andi. They live in some fictional place called Kenderson. They've known each other practically since they were born. Their moms were all best friends since high school , so the three of them had play dates before they were 2 months old. Because of this, they're practically siblings. They sleep over at someone's house almost every night, and there is LOTS of kissing between them. It seems kinda weird, but Nate, Andi and Dreya kiss eachother alot. To them, it's like how other friends hug eachother. If you just read the story, you'd think that Nate and Andi are going out, cause of all the kissing and cute little pet names, but they're not. Another thing, Dreya seems kinda bitchy, like she doesn't really like them, but she's not. They're all best friends, and anything mean said between them is a joke (in the beginning anyway)
Also: This switches P.O.V. alot, but I'll let you know when it does.
One more thing: You don't have to read this unless you want to. But if you do read it and it sucks, tell me why so I can fix it. Please.
Okay! On with the story!
-------------------------------------ANDI'S POV-------------------------------------------
Dreya's chest rose and fell in a slow and steady rhythm. I was the only one awake at our "sleepover" since Nate had fallen asleep a few minutes ago. My eyes swept over the dark room to the tightly closed window. Outside, the full white moon provided the only light in Dreya's parents' living room. I looked over from the couch I had claimed as my bed to the recliner where Nate was curled up, up-side-down. In the dim light, I could just make out his pale face against the dark fabric of the recliners footrest. When he was asleep, his long brown hair fell out of his face and I could see hie beautiful features. I had a crush on Nate, but only Dreya knew, and I would trust her with my life. She might let me almost die first, but she'd save me in the end.
I reached over to the end table by my couch and picked up my ipod. i pressed Menu and maneuvered my way to the clock. 2:13 AM I put the ipod back and tried to relax and get some sleep. I looked at Dreya one more time and suppressed a laugh. She was the first one asleep, so Nate and I had given her some magic marker facial hair.
my gaze switched over to Nate. He was curled up like a kitten, his slim body perched on the lower end of the recliner. One good yell to wake him up, and he'd be doing a face plant into the bowl of popcorn in front of his chair. I made a mental note to execute this plan in a few hours.
Sighing, I sat up and huddled myself under my flannel blanket. It was November, and Dreya's 18th century house was drafty.
It being 2 AM, and everyone else being asleep, I stood up to find something to do. i didn't want to wake evryone up just yet; that could wait till, oh, about four AM. I scanned the room for something quiet to do.
----------------------------------------------------
And mehh, I have to go for a few minutes. I'll be back, I swear to Bob.
But what do you think?
Well, some notes about my story:
Firstly, this is a story about 3 juniors in high school, named Nate, Dreya, and Andi. They live in some fictional place called Kenderson. They've known each other practically since they were born. Their moms were all best friends since high school , so the three of them had play dates before they were 2 months old. Because of this, they're practically siblings. They sleep over at someone's house almost every night, and there is LOTS of kissing between them. It seems kinda weird, but Nate, Andi and Dreya kiss eachother alot. To them, it's like how other friends hug eachother. If you just read the story, you'd think that Nate and Andi are going out, cause of all the kissing and cute little pet names, but they're not. Another thing, Dreya seems kinda bitchy, like she doesn't really like them, but she's not. They're all best friends, and anything mean said between them is a joke (in the beginning anyway)
Also: This switches P.O.V. alot, but I'll let you know when it does.
One more thing: You don't have to read this unless you want to. But if you do read it and it sucks, tell me why so I can fix it. Please.
Okay! On with the story!
-------------------------------------ANDI'S POV-------------------------------------------
Dreya's chest rose and fell in a slow and steady rhythm. I was the only one awake at our "sleepover" since Nate had fallen asleep a few minutes ago. My eyes swept over the dark room to the tightly closed window. Outside, the full white moon provided the only light in Dreya's parents' living room. I looked over from the couch I had claimed as my bed to the recliner where Nate was curled up, up-side-down. In the dim light, I could just make out his pale face against the dark fabric of the recliners footrest. When he was asleep, his long brown hair fell out of his face and I could see hie beautiful features. I had a crush on Nate, but only Dreya knew, and I would trust her with my life. She might let me almost die first, but she'd save me in the end.
I reached over to the end table by my couch and picked up my ipod. i pressed Menu and maneuvered my way to the clock. 2:13 AM I put the ipod back and tried to relax and get some sleep. I looked at Dreya one more time and suppressed a laugh. She was the first one asleep, so Nate and I had given her some magic marker facial hair.
my gaze switched over to Nate. He was curled up like a kitten, his slim body perched on the lower end of the recliner. One good yell to wake him up, and he'd be doing a face plant into the bowl of popcorn in front of his chair. I made a mental note to execute this plan in a few hours.
Sighing, I sat up and huddled myself under my flannel blanket. It was November, and Dreya's 18th century house was drafty.
It being 2 AM, and everyone else being asleep, I stood up to find something to do. i didn't want to wake evryone up just yet; that could wait till, oh, about four AM. I scanned the room for something quiet to do.
----------------------------------------------------
And mehh, I have to go for a few minutes. I'll be back, I swear to Bob.
But what do you think?