Post by `emz0, bby. on Jun 29, 2007 11:10:07 GMT -5
i dont think its that good.
Aiden reminded me of someone. He looked really familiar. “How old are you anyway, Aiden?” “Sixteen. How old are you?” “Sixteen. That’s messed up. When’s your birthday?” “August Seventeenth. When’s yours?” “Oh my God. My birthday is August Seventeenth. You don’t think…” “I’m gonna call mom.” I sat there in complete shock and confusion. I knew he reminded me of someone. I wasn’t paying attention. He reminded me of me! We had the same black hair, same cloudy hazel eyes, same light skin and the same thin face. I knew Farrah couldn’t have been directly related to him! Well, I didn’t know, but it was kinda weird that they were brother and sister. Farrah has a chubby face, brown eyes, and blonde hair. “Mom, I have to ask you a question. Are me and Brittany twins?…..No, we’re not?…..I don’t believe you…You come down here! I’m not going up there….I’ll see you in a few minutes.” “What’d she say?” “She’s coming down here. I really think that we are, but how come your friends didn’t say anything?” “They won’t say anything about things that matter. I think I have a mirror….” I pulled out a mirror that I had, just in case I needed to fix my eyeliner, and looked at both of us in it. We pretty much looked exactly the same. Just then our mom walked through the doors, dragging Farrah along. “Mom, we gotta be twins! We have the same birthday and we look almost exactly the same!” “Fine, you want to know the truth?” “Yeah!” We both said in unison. “You guys are twins, but I when I left I didn’t want a little girl, so I took Aiden.” That kinda hurt, but it didn’t. She’s never been around, so I cant take anything she says to heart. “Well, I want to stay with Brit.” She was shocked by this. “You want to stay with this no good little brat, then go ahead. I’ll notify the school. You guys can live in poverty while we live in wealth.” “Um, I’m not poor. Just because I don’t have the money to buy anything doesn’t mean I’m poor. Don‘t think so highly of yourself. You‘re just a whore.” She looked at me like she never knew I could do that. Especially in front of her precious little girl. “I’m leaving tomorrow. Aiden, I’ll send all your stuff up here.” “No, better yet, why don’t I go back and pack all of my own shit then come back? I think I’ll do that.” I love Aiden so much. He’s the coolest brother. I wonder who’s older. “While you’re still here, which one of us is older, me or Aiden?” “Aiden.” And with that, she walked away back towards her car. Lucky for us, Rachel and the rest of the gang just pulled up. We got in the car and I just had to ask the question. “You guys knew we looked alike the whole time didn’t you?” “Well, yeah.” Ray answered truthfully. “We are twins, but Aiden’s older.” “That means he can boss you around like I can boss Mikey around!” “If Aiden is too mean to you I’ll have to knock some sense into him.” Everyone laughed at that, and I kissed Frank quickly on the lips. “Where are we going anyway?” “I don’t know, let’s see. Who’s house are we going to?” “Let’s go to Frankie’s house!!” “Gee, you love Frank don’t you?” “Yes, I do.” So we’re going to Frank’s house. Okay, I’m like nervous about this now. When he met my parents it was nerve-racking for me [not as much my mother as my father], but this is the other way around now. It’s just his mother, but I’m still kinda nervous. He didn’t seem nervous, or maybe he wasn’t even thinking about it. “Do you think your mom will like me?” “I don’t think she will, I know she will.” That put me at ease a little bit, but I was still nervous. We got there and everyone walked into the house like they lived there. His mother didn’t even seem to care. But when I walked in her face lit up. “You must be Brittany.” “Yeah, that’s me,” I said shyly. I thought I’d be more nervous than shy. “Frankie said you were pretty. I can see he was right.” I smiled. I couldn’t do anything else. “Mo-om” “I’ll let you two go.” We walked to his room which is where everyone was headed. “Your mom is nice. I wish my father was more like how calm your mother is.” “Your dad wasn’t that bad.” “He kinda was.” We walked into the room and Rachel and Gerard were holding hands. “I see that we missed something.” “Yes, you did.” Frank sat down on his bed and I followed him. “Aww, Mom says me and Mikey gotta go home. She text messaged me.” “Your mom texts?” “Yeah.” “I’ll walk you guys home.” Of course Rachel offered that. We said good bye and Mikey, Gerard, and Rachel left. “And then there were five.” It’s so weird that I have a brother. I’ve gone sixteen years without him, and now he’s here. “Aiden did you really have no friends?” “Yeah. No one liked me. I was the loser emo kid. I still am to them” “That sucks. Rachel was my only friend. But now I know Frank, MCR, and you.” Aiden smiled at that. “Bob and I have to leave. I have to drive him home and some of his family is over. Why I just spoke for him I have no idea.” “Ahaha, bye.” “And then there were three. Wait, make that two. Mom’s calling and she’s most likely going to pick me up.” Just me and Frank. “It’s so weird I have a brother. Like I always wished for a sibling and now I found out I have one. It makes me happy.” “I’m glad. I want you to be happy.” “Are you happy?” “Yes, I am quite happy.” “Good.” I leaned against him and he kissed the top of my head.
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Aiden reminded me of someone. He looked really familiar. “How old are you anyway, Aiden?” “Sixteen. How old are you?” “Sixteen. That’s messed up. When’s your birthday?” “August Seventeenth. When’s yours?” “Oh my God. My birthday is August Seventeenth. You don’t think…” “I’m gonna call mom.” I sat there in complete shock and confusion. I knew he reminded me of someone. I wasn’t paying attention. He reminded me of me! We had the same black hair, same cloudy hazel eyes, same light skin and the same thin face. I knew Farrah couldn’t have been directly related to him! Well, I didn’t know, but it was kinda weird that they were brother and sister. Farrah has a chubby face, brown eyes, and blonde hair. “Mom, I have to ask you a question. Are me and Brittany twins?…..No, we’re not?…..I don’t believe you…You come down here! I’m not going up there….I’ll see you in a few minutes.” “What’d she say?” “She’s coming down here. I really think that we are, but how come your friends didn’t say anything?” “They won’t say anything about things that matter. I think I have a mirror….” I pulled out a mirror that I had, just in case I needed to fix my eyeliner, and looked at both of us in it. We pretty much looked exactly the same. Just then our mom walked through the doors, dragging Farrah along. “Mom, we gotta be twins! We have the same birthday and we look almost exactly the same!” “Fine, you want to know the truth?” “Yeah!” We both said in unison. “You guys are twins, but I when I left I didn’t want a little girl, so I took Aiden.” That kinda hurt, but it didn’t. She’s never been around, so I cant take anything she says to heart. “Well, I want to stay with Brit.” She was shocked by this. “You want to stay with this no good little brat, then go ahead. I’ll notify the school. You guys can live in poverty while we live in wealth.” “Um, I’m not poor. Just because I don’t have the money to buy anything doesn’t mean I’m poor. Don‘t think so highly of yourself. You‘re just a whore.” She looked at me like she never knew I could do that. Especially in front of her precious little girl. “I’m leaving tomorrow. Aiden, I’ll send all your stuff up here.” “No, better yet, why don’t I go back and pack all of my own shit then come back? I think I’ll do that.” I love Aiden so much. He’s the coolest brother. I wonder who’s older. “While you’re still here, which one of us is older, me or Aiden?” “Aiden.” And with that, she walked away back towards her car. Lucky for us, Rachel and the rest of the gang just pulled up. We got in the car and I just had to ask the question. “You guys knew we looked alike the whole time didn’t you?” “Well, yeah.” Ray answered truthfully. “We are twins, but Aiden’s older.” “That means he can boss you around like I can boss Mikey around!” “If Aiden is too mean to you I’ll have to knock some sense into him.” Everyone laughed at that, and I kissed Frank quickly on the lips. “Where are we going anyway?” “I don’t know, let’s see. Who’s house are we going to?” “Let’s go to Frankie’s house!!” “Gee, you love Frank don’t you?” “Yes, I do.” So we’re going to Frank’s house. Okay, I’m like nervous about this now. When he met my parents it was nerve-racking for me [not as much my mother as my father], but this is the other way around now. It’s just his mother, but I’m still kinda nervous. He didn’t seem nervous, or maybe he wasn’t even thinking about it. “Do you think your mom will like me?” “I don’t think she will, I know she will.” That put me at ease a little bit, but I was still nervous. We got there and everyone walked into the house like they lived there. His mother didn’t even seem to care. But when I walked in her face lit up. “You must be Brittany.” “Yeah, that’s me,” I said shyly. I thought I’d be more nervous than shy. “Frankie said you were pretty. I can see he was right.” I smiled. I couldn’t do anything else. “Mo-om” “I’ll let you two go.” We walked to his room which is where everyone was headed. “Your mom is nice. I wish my father was more like how calm your mother is.” “Your dad wasn’t that bad.” “He kinda was.” We walked into the room and Rachel and Gerard were holding hands. “I see that we missed something.” “Yes, you did.” Frank sat down on his bed and I followed him. “Aww, Mom says me and Mikey gotta go home. She text messaged me.” “Your mom texts?” “Yeah.” “I’ll walk you guys home.” Of course Rachel offered that. We said good bye and Mikey, Gerard, and Rachel left. “And then there were five.” It’s so weird that I have a brother. I’ve gone sixteen years without him, and now he’s here. “Aiden did you really have no friends?” “Yeah. No one liked me. I was the loser emo kid. I still am to them” “That sucks. Rachel was my only friend. But now I know Frank, MCR, and you.” Aiden smiled at that. “Bob and I have to leave. I have to drive him home and some of his family is over. Why I just spoke for him I have no idea.” “Ahaha, bye.” “And then there were three. Wait, make that two. Mom’s calling and she’s most likely going to pick me up.” Just me and Frank. “It’s so weird I have a brother. Like I always wished for a sibling and now I found out I have one. It makes me happy.” “I’m glad. I want you to be happy.” “Are you happy?” “Yes, I am quite happy.” “Good.” I leaned against him and he kissed the top of my head.
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